No longer a child
and yet not old
No longer shy
still not bold
In between
rich and poor;
good and bad…
wanting more
than my mother had
Full of ideas
and things to do
Feel like paper
in need of glue
copyright 2006
No longer a child
and yet not old
No longer shy
still not bold
In between
rich and poor;
good and bad…
wanting more
than my mother had
Full of ideas
and things to do
Feel like paper
in need of glue
copyright 2006
love it…..that seems to be happening a lot here 🙂
i’ll always take ‘love it’ for a comment. nothing sounds sweeter to a writer i guess.
sarah
i’m running out of things to say sarah! i looked back on that first comment and it seemed bland, so decided to explain it…
your comment was fine – no explanations necessary.
sarah
I do love it 🙂
thank you, qazse. and welcome.
sarah
Dear Sarah!
I’ve flown through your poems, but this one stopped me hovering still! Superior rythm and impact!
Cheers,
Robert-Gilles
why yes you have! thank you for spending so much time reading my little poems, i’m very flattered. this one is a personal favorite of mine.
sarah