If I Were…

2008 September 10
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by sarah flanigan

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  1. 2008 September 10
    spasmicallyperfect permalink

    Wow.
    Where did that all come from?
    Shooting through the universe like a burning comet.
    Beautiful.
    Mystical.
    Playful.
    Me loves it.
    Plain and simple.

    hi spaz,
    well the inspiration came quickly, i’ll admit – perhaps that was the whooshing sound you heard, rather than a comet? thank you, dear for the nice adjectives. ;)
    sarah

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  2. 2008 September 10
    Red permalink

    lovely.
    pure.
    love the idea of this piece, sarah.

    well hello, red! good to see you. i rather liked the idea of this poem myself. thank you.
    sarah

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  3. 2008 September 11
    Art and Poetry permalink

    Very nice and the photo as well!

    than you very much and for reading.
    sarah

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  4. 2008 September 11
    duskydi permalink

    Shooting love. So uplifting. So there.

    I wish I could write poems like this. I wonder if I could,I don’t even know what cerulean means . :)

    Loving this poem
    Love & Light
    Di

    hi di,
    i’m sure you could write any type of poem you wanted to write. cerulean is a most beautiful shade of blue. check google images for it. gorgeous.
    sarah

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  5. 2008 September 11
    wayne permalink

    a cerulean sky
    sea-green eyes

    Simply smashing. I am dizzy from drinking in this piece.

    ~wayne

    thank you, wayne – i do love the blues and greens.
    sarah

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  6. 2008 September 12
    ozymandiaz permalink

    really really beautiful

    why thank you, ozy. thank you very much.
    sarah

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  7. 2008 September 14
    Cynthia permalink

    the sweetest love note, so romantic!

    *smile*

    sarah

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