Comments on: It’s Okay

By: janetleigh

janetleigh — Sat, 26 Apr 2008 07:31:29 +0000

This excellent poem also sound like it could be a song. My favorite stanza is the following:

“Push the button
and then I’m gone
Never happened
unsung that song.”

This just rocks! I wish I had written it..:)

hello again,
i had a period when everything i wrote had a sort of rap backbeat to it – this is one of those. i think i was feeling particularly attitude-ish at the time. i’m flattered that you wished you wrote it – you couldn’t say anything nicer to a writer, could you? thanks, so much.
sarah

By: dragonlife

dragonlife — Mon, 28 May 2007 11:11:19 +0000

That’s about what my wife tells me every day….

your wife sounds very wise.
sarah

By: debambam

debambam — Sat, 26 May 2007 06:47:21 +0000

I really like this, the title is just a tad sarcastic..and thats great!
Kelly

hi kel,
good to see you again. how is your new life treating you? yes, sarcastic – probably more than a tad, though – and that’s the way i like it.
sarah

By: Evan

Evan — Tue, 22 May 2007 11:14:25 +0000

I felt like constructing a bubble for the protagonist to sit in during this .
good one

hello darling boy, where have you been? a bubble? hmm…interesting – do they get a guitar too?
sarah

By: alison

alison — Mon, 21 May 2007 13:25:05 +0000

unsung that song. You know me and music. wow. *bites lip* more than feel this one, Sarah. Love the picture. Ali

ali,
that’s the ultimate compliment ‘more than feel this one’ thank you, dear.
sarah

By: totaltransformation

totaltransformation — Mon, 21 May 2007 01:58:11 +0000

I have to admit, the picture was a bit creepy.

do you really think so? i love the picture. it’s called crying woman. i suppose for me, it’s all about capturing visually what my words are trying to say.
sarah

By: chughes

chughes — Sun, 20 May 2007 20:10:24 +0000

“…I’m a threat/to your peace of mind”
“time aint nothin’/and neither am I”
“Never happened/unsung that song”
Great, great lines these are, creative and powerful good.
i wish i could write good rhyme.
~christine

kind of you to say, christine, but your writing is incredible. so eloquent and real. i’ll trade you my rhyme for your depth.
sarah

By: tomachfive

tomachfive — Sun, 20 May 2007 10:45:45 +0000

Splendid.

as are you!
sarah

By: anonymum

anonymum — Sun, 20 May 2007 10:09:29 +0000

this is good sarah…really good…i really enjoyed reading this one…not that i don’t enjoy the others mind you

thanks, dear. i actually enjoyed writing it.
sarah

By: jesse

jesse — Sun, 20 May 2007 06:08:13 +0000

I love it!!!!
Wish you would come write at my site. You are very talented and I just loved reading as your words flowed with ease and were tasted with delight.
Jesse

hi jesse,
thank you for all the nice words. please feel free to email me, if you like. my contact info is on the ‘about me’ page.
sarah